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__My Name__ = Kyle Gosciminski

__Presentation Date__ = Tuesday, Jan 5th, 2009; B block, Day 2

__My Mentor__ = Mr. Arner

__Subject & sub-topics__ = Use Anabolic Steroids increase MLB player performance hitting ball farther

__Thesis Question__ = How has the use of anabolic steroids increased a M.L.B. players performance of hitting a ball farther?

__Thesis Sentence__ = The use of anabolic steroids increases a M.L.B. players performance to hit the ball farther.

__Statements__ = Since strength training is a major part of improving your performance of hitting, M.L.B. players use anabolic steroids so that they can build up their muscle faster and stronger which allows them to hit the ball farther.

__Premise(s)__ = Since strength training is a major part of improving your performance of hitting

__Conclusion__ = So that they can build up their muscle faster and stronger which allows them to hit the ball farther.

__Thesis sentence (argument included)__ = Since strength training is a major part of improving a baseball player's performance of hitting, M.L.B. players use anabolic steroids in order to develop their muscles quickness and strength which allows players to hit the ball farther.

__Thesis Question (enhanced)__ = How has the use of anabolic steroids increase a baseball players muscles quickness and strength so that they can perform better and hit the ball farther?